what would you say about these lyrics?

i really like posting my lyrics here because you guys dont sugar coat
anything, you guys are straight forward, and i respect that. so im
going to post something i wirte about an hour ago, and i would
appreciate if you guys tell me what you think.

people judgin and hatin, they never heard of me.
if they would pay attention, then they could probably learn from me.
no funeral for the friendship, pick up the urn for me.
we were on the same page but then you turned from me.
see the drama, love to hate it, but cant stand to love it.
but in certain situations i take advantage of it.
some people think below the drama, but i plan above it.
my mouth is very tired, like it ran the hundred.
close your eyes, think of the happy days and frown quick.
never lookin at the plot, but it sounds thick,
makes me feel like i lost it, but i found this.
and if certain things define me, then im about this.
imma guzzle down the truth, while yall drink and sip.
future's in my hands, never sittin on the finger tips.
cant make it up and run, i gotta think and sit.
never on the edge of amazing, im on the brink of it.

this si something i wrote just for fun. thank you for reading and
answering in advance.
lol sorry u didnt like that.
idk if its cuz people just pay attention to the last word of each line
or "advantage of it" and "plan above it" arent too complex, but i dont
put my best on the internet. i dont want people to steal them.